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Pretty good. The tune was good but not very catchy or memorable. I liked the animation style a lot! Whether it was intentional I kind of like the skippyness of it. In any other animation this may have been a problem but it works here. The overall concept isn't very original but neither is 80% of newgrounds. So I can't hold that against you. My biggest recommendation is working on the song. But besides that, this was fairly good.
Well, let me try to explain why this animation is mediocre. The framerate is about 1fps. I am aware it was made with ms paint and wmm. You made it really obvious. The thing is, you shouldn't make animations with MS Paint. You can get flash by torrenting or just being a good person and buying it. No audio is also something that lowers the score a lot. The art isn't great either.
I do hope that one day you will get flash and begin to improve on your work though. Good Luck! (Also if someone says they hate your animation, don't get made at them and call them idiots. It gives you a bit of a bad reputation. Either don't respond to them, or just try to understand that they are either trolls or people with some form of mental disorder.)
While it is definitely an improvement of the first in most senses, I actually like being friendly with my Buddy, this game doesn't give much option for that, especially at the beginning. I resorted to throwing basketballs at it (because It was the method that seemed the least painful for my widdle buddy) The Buddy also seems to have lost the ability to catch baseballs and earn you money and instead takes pain when it touches his hand.
Anyways those are my complaints, great game, improved gameplay and graphics, however the target audience is much more specific this time around. Alienating only a very small portion of players. Mind you dragging the buddy through certain scenes trying not to hit mines was fun for me!
I admire your ability at your young age (13) but there's nothing I hate more then people who think it can be used as a defence. I'm not going to compare my performance to yours because I wouldn't be surprised if you we're better than me in the next 2 years but at 13 I expect you to be receiving criticism and taking it into consideration a lot better than you do. I've seen your replies to some people and there downright insulting. People should follow the motto "The customer is always right." Technically a game you submit to Newgrounds is your Product and the players are the customers. Argue and insult them, and you'll make you look bad. To everyone. I don't want to be playing the game of someone who calls anyone who makes a negative remark about their product an "asshole."
Anyway onto the actual game. Well you already submitted a games simular to this Ganmizar and Flarez which received poor reviews, so wouldn't you consider improving every aspect of it in your next game rather than just adding a mechanic or two? There's a difference between realistic graphics and being graphically appealing, this falls under neither. No sounds also KILLS your score.
So my advice is to simply work more on the graphical elements of the game a lot more because obviously what's going on right now isn't working. Add sound to the game, this is a MUST have. If you have nothing positive or reasoning to say to the reviews you receive don't say anything. (This isn't a comment box, this is a review section hence why one person can only post one review per flash as opposed to being able to spam the section with pointless comments) Games aren't to be made in a few hours or days, they should takes months or even over a year depending on the game. I understand this was suppose to be the beta but to see how you gave up on the game because you lost the .FLA I can't see that you took this game very seriously any ways.
Anyways, I hope to see good things from you in the future, some my cricism was harsh, but that's life and it's the only way I could of effectively got my points across and the reason I gave you this long review was because I think if you put a few more years into learning flash, you could be pretty good. So I recommend learning more before attempting again. Cheers.
Dis is gud game. Make Red Car Game 2: Rise of the Blue Car.
Amazing! Now i'm not sure if I want to play Bravely Default or Final Fantasy 4! Great job on this piece!
Awesome track! I'll be using this in one of my RPGs! If that's okay with you of course! :)
Thanks a lot! You are welcome to use it ^^
I love this tune! As well as your other ones. I hope you make more, They bring back a lot of nostalgia and are just so relaxing to listen to :)
I love it! Keep it up!
Rofl! This pic makes me ROFL everytime! You may not be the ebst drawer, but you my friend, are a genious!
lol thnx and sorry for late reply
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